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The poetry corner - post your poems in here
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Hi everyone,
This is a thread for sharing your creative works.
Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.
This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.
We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.
Thanks for your understanding.
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Tony like this poem,
especially the last lines.
Put clothes upon their own skeleton
They carry around with them
-all the damn time……
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Hi Bob_22
Just reading again, & I really like the last line:
"What lingers on when whispers speak"
I've had a troubling sort of day, & somehow, that line has struck a chord within me. Thank you.
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No worries mmMeKitty, thank you so much for the feedback!
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TOP HATS AND TAILS
Top hats and tails of the creatures born
clique of a kind seek outsiders torn
To tear the heart of Samaritans of vision
out numbered by poppies that make decisions
And the trumpets blast as the cocoon has split
to reveal the butterfly with a woody wit
to call upon those with chests, no medals adorn
Top hats and tails of the creatures born
With whispers over café dribble and fire
Quasi council with no tuxedo attire
Squash the Samaritan with a sharp whack
Only when the butterfly has turned his back
That’s the way the culture goes down
Pitter patter when not around
lust for power and hearts are torn
Top hat without tails of the creatures born
And the bees play trumpets and the birds still sing
that’s what nature always brings
Meeting place dormant no meeting a fire
whispers go on…without tuxedo attire…
Come here to us , new to the land
speak and tell us of your plan
We are the ones no medals adorn
Top hats no tails of the creatures born...
TonyWK
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In a crowded house, I'm on my own.
Laughter echoes, I can't partake,
Isolation lingers, it's my heartache.
then family is near, yet distant as a stone.
Amidst my kin, I feel alone...
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Thank you, Wolfie.
One thought leads to another. (& some thoughts are never very far away).
* But I Did Recall
I felt so small -
Against the wall.
He feet so tall;
I was going to fall.
I couldn’t speak at all,
But I did recall.
Next, I kicked & brawled
But didn’t sprawl.
Will I use my voice & call
& stop this, once & for all?
mmMekitty
July 16 2023
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UNCLE WITH A HEART
Three decades ago he knew you from the start
Then watched you grow up tall that uncle with a heart
He stirred you all the timie, every chance he got
You were the apple of his eye, you were his “forget me not”
And on that saddest day, of all the news you had
You lost your beautiful uncle, no wonder you were sad
He left you with his love, affection is an art
You’ll never forget him… your uncle with a heart…
TonyWK
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Wow, just read the poems on this page. They are amazing!
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P.S. Tony, Caravan Repairs is hilarious 😂 Multiple funny images went through my mind.