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The poetry corner - post your poems in here

Chris_B
Blue Voices Member
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Hi everyone,

This is a thread for sharing your creative works. 

Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.  

This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.

We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.

Thanks for your understanding. 

 

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G'Day all,

 

I have always been passionate about Mens’ Health and just recently wrote a poem about Persistence. I thought I would send it to ‘Beyond Blue', an organisation that always leads by example, ‘talk’s the talk and walk’s the walk’.

 

Hopefully, this humble Ode might resonate with one person who might be doing it tough right now and thinks there is no end in sight.

 

ODE TO PERSISTENCE

Can you hear it in the distance?

Past the willows and the trees

Through the rain and misty valleys

On the tide of aqua seas?

Like a camel in the desert,

You go searching for a drink,

But that shimmer’s just a glimmer...

Into dust, your hopes do sink.

Still, you climb that lofty mountain,

Up amongst the rocky crops

Your legs are tired and weary,

And the struggle never stops.


Then you float along the ocean

Life-raft bursting at the seams.

But the drifting lasts forever,

And it never meets your dreams.

 

How much longer can you take it?

Will you ever find the key?

Your internal voice reminds you,

There’s a place you need to be.


You try and make your own luck,

As the time keeps ticking by,

Because you know your dream is worthy

So, you give it one more try!

With a soul in search of wisdom

You’re committed to the truth,

And soon you start to realise...

That all you need is proof!

Like a dancer chasing answers –

waltzing proudly down the road

Then you ask yourself the question -

What's the moral of this ode?

And a light comes shining brightly

As it’s whispered in your ear -

Keep on pushing forward friend...

Success is very near.

EXCEPT FOR TODAY (17.3.2024)
 
I'm an atheist except for today
And maybe more that come my way
So you might be alarmed if I pray
My best mate is drifting away
He built me a workbench from the wood I gave
A picture frame and a gentle wave
And his courage as the cancer grows
"You're My best mate" -now the world knows
Through blur of love we've had our say
My best mate is eroding away
So don't be surprised if you see me pray
I'm an atheist... except for today...
 
TonyWK

Lovely poem, Tony.

Hugzies

mmMekitty