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WRITING HELPS ME SO MUCH< I HOPE YOU LIKE THIS ONE <
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03-07-2014
09:38 AM
WHO ARE?
You visit without warning,
Who are you that visits?
You visit in the depths of the night, sending chills
throughout my body,
Who are you that
visits?
You visit as day breaks,
Who are you that visits?
You stay although you are not welcome,
Who are you that visits?
You clutter my mind, you consume my every thought,
Who are you that
visits?
How come you have chosen me, what makes me so special that
you want to be with me?
Who are you that visits?
You trap me in a dark place not wanting to venture out
Who are you that visits?
You make the light of day seem like the darkness of night!
Who are you that visits?
You feed off my tears, my fears, my fright, and you push me into
darkness, that feels like a deep pit
There seems no end to this bottomless pit
Try as you might, I won’t let you beat me no I won’t
Who are you that visits without an invite?
Yes I now know just who you are
Well guess what? DEPRESSION IS OUT!!!!!
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03-07-2014
05:01 PM
Hi Filee,
You are a great writer, I really liked this piece. I agree writing helps you express how you feel in a very unique way.
Keep writing, especially if it helps:) and feel free to share with us whenever you like.
AG
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07-08-2014
02:14 PM
Filee, its a perfect description of how many of us feel. I can never think of what I need to say when I have the chance to talk so I write when things come to mind. I write them down so hey are out of my mind. sometimes I send them to the people involved (usually one person in particular) or I just throw them out. once they are written down they are out of my mind. I write, then read and add as much as I need to. the person receiving says im selfish, all about me but I cant talk about things.