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I don't know if this helps or makes things worse but I write poetry about how I am feeling. This is one:
Hurt:
And so it goes
The story of to and fros
The ups and downs
Will sadden the happiest of clowns
Scared of the pain
You are the one left to drain
Each week has a new low
You have become life’s little hoe
Nothing inside is left to hurt
Your heart torn out and stomped in the dirt
The pain turns physical
A razor is now seen as clinical
The loss of a friend
Another step closer to the end
You push and mislead
They want to help and do a good deed
Your mind is now your worst enemy
Will you ever find some form of clarity?
Your hurt and scared
Are you too damaged to be repaired?
Allow people in please!
The pain will begin to ease
Dont be scared of this monster
Be the hero of the story
Tame the beast and learn to conquer
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Hi CedricT,
Thank you so much for sharing your powerful poetry with us. You have a great way of expressing yourself.
I am sure there is a thread here with poetry from others, you may be interested in having a look for it.
My mind is a little fuzzy today, so sorry I can't direct you to the right place to find the other thread! Maybe someone else can direct you there!
Poetry and just writing down thoughts are great ways to express how we are feeling and to release what we feel.
Thanks again for sharing and welcome to the community here on the forum!
Cheers from Dools
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Hi CedricT,
Me again! I have just found the thread is called The poetry corner - post your poems here by Chris B. It can be found in the Social Zone.
Please know this does not mean you are obliged in any way to post your poems there, you can certainly continue to do so here.
Just thought you might like a look at other people's poetry as well!
Cheers again from Dools
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Hi CedricT,
What a heart wrenching poem. I was moved by how you expressed your feelings of despair, pain and loss. But I also liked the message of hope/will to survive at the very end.
Beautiful....thank you so much for sharing...
Would you like to tell us a little more about how you’re holding up? Based on the poem, you seem to be going through a lot...
Perhaps you can share some more of your feelings in another poem (or any other written form that you like). That being said, there’s no pressure of course. Only if you want to...just know we are here if you would like to talk...
Kind and caring thoughts.
Pepper
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Hi Doolhof
thanks for the welcome! Also thanks for looking into the poetry thread. I will have a look into it
Cheers!!
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Thanks for the kind words and support Pepper!
I have a fair few poems I might put up or on the poetry thread. They are quite personal so it is hard to get them up. But I will try
Thanks heaps
Cedric
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Hi Cedric,
Like I mentioned, you are more than welcome to continue to share your poetry here on this thread you have created, or to share any of your story here in an way you might like to if needed.
The Poetry thread is certainly available to you and everyone to share or to just read.
Hope you are doing okay!
Cheers from Dools