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24-06-2017
07:59 AM
Loving Chi (c)
I look in the mirror, what do I see?
A very strange image staring back at me.
Where is the kindness, I like to share?
Shrouded in blackness, as I stand there.
The mirror is hazy, blurry and stark,
Why does my image look so dark?
I try again, I focus ahead,
My eyes stare back, ever so dead.
I rub my eyes and try once more,
I see my dark side, ever so raw.
My hand lifts up, in a straight line,
What stares back, has a hateful sign.
My image is rigid, stoic and black,
It’s shamed, it’s ugly, but starts to crack.
I stare once more, with kinder eyes,
This time I look close, past all the lies.
I glimpse the kind soul, lying within,
I start to smile and lift up my chin.
I leave with this image, held tight to me,
And start my day, with a loving chi.
I look in the mirror, what do I see?
A very strange image staring back at me.
Where is the kindness, I like to share?
Shrouded in blackness, as I stand there.
The mirror is hazy, blurry and stark,
Why does my image look so dark?
I try again, I focus ahead,
My eyes stare back, ever so dead.
I rub my eyes and try once more,
I see my dark side, ever so raw.
My hand lifts up, in a straight line,
What stares back, has a hateful sign.
My image is rigid, stoic and black,
It’s shamed, it’s ugly, but starts to crack.
I stare once more, with kinder eyes,
This time I look close, past all the lies.
I glimpse the kind soul, lying within,
I start to smile and lift up my chin.
I leave with this image, held tight to me,
And start my day, with a loving chi.
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24-06-2017
08:19 AM
Hello again Greenkazbar. I welcomed you yesterday when you posted another poem in the Depression forums. Did you read my response there yet?
I see you have been busy with some more very beautiful and poignant poetry.
In future you may be interested in reading and posting to an already existing Poetry thread. It is located under the BB Social Zone section of forums. If you google the link below it will come up with it. Your contributions there would be very welcome.
https://www.beyondblue.org.au/get-support/online-forums/bb-social-zone/the-poetry-corner---post-your-poems-in-here
I hope you have a good day GreenKazbar.
Taurus