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Hi everyone,
This is a thread for sharing your creative works.
Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.
This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.
We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.
Thanks for your understanding.
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A little plant of little acclaim,
A small flower of smaller fame
A tiny plant without any sun
A creature that's only now begun
If it stays deep in deep gray shade
Its life and will will surely fade
How could one allow such sorrow
Cowardice to turn from tomorrow
A plant that strives not for shine
Will give its life for reapers' dine
It cannot last a second's breath
Without light it falls quick to death
A plant that stays in the shadow's wake
Can only tremble and weep and quake
But a plant can grow, and grow towards life
A plant can flourish and cast off strife
It needs to bend and twist and turn
Push itself towards the sun-beam's burn
Grow and stretch up towards the sky
Demand to live, refuse to die
How it hurts and burns and stings,
The sight of those to the shadows cling
A bloom worth seeing sees the light
We must be brave, as a flower might
(S. de Vere)
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Hi all, what great poems. And I'm getting a few written for me- so nice. Feelings can be wonderful.
Short story before a special poem. 8 and a half years ago a killer on parole raped and murdered two young adult sisters in Melbourne. He fled and in 3 days drove to Karratha WA...yeh way up north. He was pulled over by a policeman and in a violent scuffle the killer was shot dead. The policeman suffered facial injuries.
Ten days after the murders I stopped at the cemetery in country Victoria where I met the mother. I chatted and try to comfort a stranger. I asked if I could write to her, she agreed. 8 years later I'm still writing..about 60 poems. they line her dining room walls. It was all about helping her and her husband cope. I didnt expect the close friendship I got.
This poems was written for mothers day 2007 15 months after the tragedy. It came from imagination and strong feelings. I heard that every poem I gave them, they would sit over a coffee and discuss every line, deciphering their meaning. Nothing can make up for their loss but humans can comfort each other to make things easier to cope.
For me it was a journey of one purpose. To be humble to help two strangers for zero reward. It turned out that love is and has been given back. And that is so wonderful
HOUSE OF WAX
He was busy with the pouring
this old man's name of Max
so I toured his workplace while he toiled
this holy house of wax
There were inventors of a kind
and starlets from a stage
there were masterminds of talent
from another age
There were heroes of the wars
and leaders of a group
there were figurines of wax
from every allied troop
I stopped to admire him work
His name tag read just "Max"
"You really are a marvel
how you recreate with wax"
I focused on his one off mold
and marvelled when it set
this figure of a lady
that I recently had met
Her arms were open wide
as if about to fly
I asked a simple question
I asked a simple "why"
"Because she is cradling her girls
even though you cannot see
it is the stance she had
when they were one and three
He continued to work away
as his making of a sign did end
and I was in total awe
of the mirror image of my friend
He rolled out the final cast
to place at Shirley's feet
this house of wax curator
that I was glad to meet
He placed the cast just right
this single cast of one
the sign read appropriately
"This is the perfect mum"....
WK
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I just had a memory
a memory of us
of a time when we were happy
before all of the fuss
its made me feel so sad again
and now I just can't sleep
I'm lying here thinking
of how we used to be
we were like two little kids
you made me feel so young
i still can't figure it out
why it had to go so wrong
still I just don't get it
why it had to end
what were you so scared of
my heart will never mend
So for now I will just lie here
just lie here wide awake
why did I even meet you
was it all a big mistake?
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TODAY IS GOING TO BE A GOOD DAY 🙂
Today is another day
I'm so glad I live by the bay
The sun is out
without a doubt
Today is going to be a good day
I sit by the beach
Listening to the birds screech
The mountains around
It's a beautiful surround
It's so peaceful out there
Without a single care
I feel so calm
As I look into my palm
Today is going to be a good day
The water is still
The breeze I can feel
The sand in my hair
Gee I wish you could be there
The beach is my place
To get out of this space
I look to the sky
I wish I could fly
Today is going to be a good day
Jo
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That was beautiful Jo,
Thanks for sharing it 🙂
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WK,
I just read the poem "To kiss his temple" and the sad realistic is that is exactly what my father was/is like even to this day. No affection to his 3 sons but my youngest sister is the apple of his eye.
It is even to the point I am now estranged from my immediate family but am lucky that my wifes family treat me better than what my own ever did.
It is ironic as my Pa, dad's dad was the kindest most compassionate person I have ever met and loved nothing more than a hug and a kiss from his grandkids- boys and girls. I was lucky enough to spend most of my school holiday time growing up with him and as got older and had a family of my own spent so much time with him and my boys even got to know him. They thought that Pa was actually my dad with the amount of time we spent and how I was around him.
I have been lucky and privilege to receive his WW2 medals amongst other prized possessions since his passing just a few years ago. I have/do miss him like crazy and below is a poem I go to all the time to remind me just a little more of him.
Whenever I read this I cant help but have a tear for the love and admiration I had for this great man. And proud to admit that a 35 year old can shed a tear!!
TOGETHER YET APART
It's gotten harder and harder
since the day you went away
but still people keep telling me
everything shall be okay
I know deep inside
that it's better up there
but we're not together
which makes it unfair
Seems like yesterday
that we were together
then I opened my eyes
to realize gone means forever
It hurts and it aches
it's slicing my heart
for the rest of my life
we shall be apart
I'm waiting for the future
hoping to see
that when I die
You'll open up those gates for me
Having a Pa
with a heart made of gold
is my favorite treasure
which will never grow old
Family reunions
will never be the same
'cause you're not there with us
to be stronger I aim
Your chair at the table
is empty and cold
you need to come home
I need someone to hold
Now that you're gone
I have novone to run to
Am I doing this right
please send me a clue
I don't understand
the meaning of life
I can't get this right
Keep getting in strife
Do you know
How much we all love you
Do you realize
How much I trust You
You're officially gone
But forever in my heart
You and me Pa
together, yet apart
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Jo, that was great. It was simple, easy to read, wonderful and inspiring. Your poetry has come a long way in such a short time.
BIG BROTHER
My brother was 6 when I was three
that didnt matter to little ol' me
he'd push me around in a Zephyr car
and double decker busses were our friend afar
We'd grab the front seat top deck
my brother's caring arm around my neck
watching the oldies come aboard
they sat anywhere- but not where we hoard
We grew up different, he was always upset
a teacher he be, arm still around my neck
then one day sad he left us quick
a note he left - gave life the flick
so every now and then
I wonder around thinking of times back when
we'd climb on that double decker bus with fun
when our lives had only just begun
A tear falls down when I recall
those days before he had his 'fall'
my mind drifts away but what the heck
his arm is still resting around my neck....
wk
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Hi Gray D
Yes, amazing how we men love our own, other men that influenced us and gave us joy and love.
Great memories in a great poem. Yeh, tears are good.
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Jo
WOW! That's amazing :=)
Struggler
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White Knight
Your poems are so good you need to put patent or copyright on them to stop theft.
Struggler