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The poetry corner - post your poems in here

Chris_B
Blue Voices Member
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Hi everyone,

This is a thread for sharing your creative works. 

Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.  

This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.

We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.

Thanks for your understanding. 

 

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AGrace
Blue Voices Member
Blue Voices Member
The Flower's Bravery

A little plant of little acclaim, 

A small flower of smaller fame

A tiny plant without any sun

A creature that's only now begun

If it stays deep in deep gray shade

Its life and will will surely fade

How could one allow such sorrow

Cowardice to turn from tomorrow

A plant that strives not for shine

Will give its life for reapers' dine

It cannot last a second's breath

Without light it falls quick to death

A plant that stays in the shadow's wake

Can only tremble and weep and quake

But a plant can grow, and grow towards life

A plant can flourish and cast off strife

It needs to bend and twist and turn

Push itself towards the sun-beam's burn

Grow and stretch up towards the sky

Demand to live, refuse to die

How it hurts and burns and stings,

The sight of those to the shadows cling

A bloom worth seeing sees the light

We must be brave, as a flower might

(S. de Vere)

white knight
Community Champion
Community Champion

Hi all, what great poems. And I'm getting a few written for me- so nice. Feelings can be wonderful.

Short story before a special poem. 8 and a half years ago a killer on parole raped and murdered two young adult sisters in Melbourne. He fled and in 3 days drove to Karratha WA...yeh way up north. He was pulled over by a policeman and in a violent scuffle the killer was shot dead. The policeman suffered facial injuries.

Ten days after the murders I stopped at the cemetery in country Victoria where I met the mother. I chatted and try to comfort a stranger. I asked if I could write to her, she agreed. 8 years later I'm still writing..about 60 poems. they line her dining room walls. It was all about helping her and her husband cope. I didnt expect the close friendship I got.

This poems was written for mothers day 2007 15 months after the tragedy. It came from imagination and strong feelings. I heard that every poem I gave them, they would sit over a coffee and discuss every line, deciphering their meaning. Nothing can make up for their loss but humans can comfort each other to make things easier to cope.

 For me it was a journey of one purpose. To be humble to help two strangers for zero reward. It turned out that love is and has been given back. And that is so wonderful

HOUSE OF WAX

He was busy with the pouring

this old man's name of Max

so I toured his workplace while he toiled

this holy house of wax

 

There were inventors of a kind

and starlets from a stage

there were masterminds of talent

from another age

 

There were heroes of the wars

and leaders of a group

there were figurines of wax

from every allied troop

 

I stopped to admire him work

His name tag read just "Max"

"You really are a marvel

how you recreate with wax"

 

I focused on his one off mold

and marvelled when it set

this figure of a lady

that I recently had met

 

Her arms were open wide

as if about to fly

I asked a simple question

I asked a simple "why"

 

"Because she is cradling her girls

even though you cannot see

it is the stance she had

when they were one and three

 

He continued to work away

as his making of a sign did end

and I was in total awe

of the mirror image of my friend

 

He rolled out the final cast

to place at Shirley's feet

this house of wax curator

that I was glad to meet

 

He placed the cast just right

this single cast of one

the sign read appropriately

"This is the perfect mum"....

 

WK

 


 

CMF
Blue Voices Member
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I just had a memory

a memory of us

of a time when we were happy

before all of the fuss

its made me feel so sad again

and now I just can't sleep

I'm lying here thinking

of how we used to be

we were like two little kids

you made me feel so young

i still can't figure it out

why it had to go so wrong

still I just don't get it

why it had to end 

what were you so scared of

my heart will never mend

So for now I will just lie here

just lie here wide awake

why did I even meet you

was it all a big mistake?

 

Jo3
Blue Voices Member
Blue Voices Member

TODAY IS GOING TO BE A GOOD DAY 🙂

Today is another day

I'm so glad I live by the bay

The sun is out

without a doubt

Today is going to be a good day

 

I sit by the beach

Listening to the birds screech

The mountains around

It's a beautiful surround

 

It's so peaceful out there

Without a single care

I feel so calm 

As I look into my palm

Today is going to be a good day

 

The water is still

The breeze I can feel

The sand in my hair

Gee I wish you could be there

 

The beach is my place

To get out of this space

I look to the sky

I wish I could fly

Today is going to be a good day

 

Jo

 

CMF
Blue Voices Member
Blue Voices Member

That was beautiful Jo,

 

Thanks for sharing it 🙂

WK,

I just read the poem "To kiss his temple" and the sad realistic is that is exactly what my father was/is like even to this day. No affection to his 3 sons but my youngest sister is the apple of his eye.

It is even to the point I am now estranged from my immediate family but am lucky that my wifes family treat me better than what my own ever did.

It is ironic as my Pa, dad's dad was the kindest most compassionate person I have ever met and loved nothing more than a hug and a kiss from his grandkids- boys and girls. I was lucky enough to spend most of my school holiday time growing up with him and as got older and had a family of my own spent so much time with him and my boys even got to know him. They thought that Pa was actually my dad with the amount of time we spent and how I was around him.

I have been lucky and privilege to receive his WW2 medals amongst other prized possessions since his passing just a few years ago. I have/do miss him like crazy and below is a poem I go to all the time to remind me just a little more of him.

Whenever I read this I cant help but have a tear for the love and admiration I had for this great man. And proud to admit that a 35 year old can shed a tear!!

TOGETHER YET APART

It's gotten harder and harder
since the day you went away
but still people keep telling me
everything shall be okay

I know deep inside
that it's better up there
but we're not together
which makes it unfair

Seems like yesterday
that we were together
then I opened my eyes
to realize gone means forever

It hurts and it aches
it's slicing my heart
for the rest of my life
we shall be apart

I'm waiting for the future
hoping to see
that when I die
You'll open up those gates for me

Having a Pa
with a heart made of gold
is my favorite treasure
which will never grow old

Family reunions
will never be the same
'cause you're not there with us
to be stronger I aim

Your chair at the table
is empty and cold
you need to come home
I need someone to hold

Now that you're gone
I have novone to run to
Am I doing this right
please send me a clue

I don't understand
the meaning of life
I can't get this right
Keep getting in strife

Do you know
How much we all love you
Do you realize
How much I trust You

You're officially gone
But forever in my heart
You and me Pa
together, yet apart

 

 

white knight
Community Champion
Community Champion

Jo, that was great. It was simple, easy to read, wonderful and inspiring. Your poetry has come a long way in such a short time.

 

BIG BROTHER

My brother was 6 when I was three

that didnt matter to little ol' me

he'd push me around in a Zephyr car

and double decker busses were our friend afar

 

We'd grab the front seat top deck

my brother's caring arm around my neck

watching the oldies come aboard

they sat anywhere- but not where we hoard

 

We grew up different, he was always upset

a teacher he be, arm still around my neck

then one day sad he left us quick

a note he left - gave life the flick

 

so every now and then

I wonder around thinking of times back when

we'd climb on that double decker bus with fun

when our lives had only just begun

 

A tear falls down when I recall

those days before he had his 'fall'

my mind drifts away but what the heck

his arm is still resting around my neck....

 

wk

 

white knight
Community Champion
Community Champion

Hi Gray D

Yes, amazing how we men love our own, other men that influenced us and gave us joy and love.

Great memories in a great poem.  Yeh, tears are good.

Struggler
Community Member

Jo

WOW!  That's amazing :=)

Struggler

White Knight

Your poems are so good you need to put patent or copyright on them to stop theft. 

Struggler