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Hi everyone,
This is a thread for sharing your creative works.
Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.
This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.
We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.
Thanks for your understanding.
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wants me to stay in bed and hide the day away
You say:
"Get up.
Don't roll over.
Though it seems like not a lot is going your way,
Your cup
runneth over.
You must make something out of this horrid day"
You're an integral part
and much better than my heart
at stopping me from going too much madder
Thank you bladder
Thank you bladder
Thank you bladder
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Here is my attempt written in 2007
The House
We rented your house
we liked it you see.
My son loved to climb
Your beautiful tree.
I did really like that deep tub of pink,
and even the old bathroom sink.
I loved the stones around the fireplace,
and watching the flames that warmed my face.
I am thankful for the bookcase of wood,
in the little sunroom is where it stood.
I loved the picture of your teddy bear,
sitting in his reading chair.
And oh! What a mulberry tree,
God was really blessing me.
I loved to smell the lemon blossom sweet,
as I tried to prune that purple daisy neat.
The air conditioner was cool in the summer heat,
and green grass in the back was soft under feet.
On the brick wall sometimes neighbours sat,
my son loved to see them and have a chat.
I'm very thankful for living there,
and the memories I have I am willing to share.
By Shelley anne.
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I don't know what this is. It's just something I wrote on a notepad next to some doodles when I was in the void
some-kind of bitter after taste
some kind of pain I can't locate
some kind of creeping down my spine
some kind of thought I can't define
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A poem from a wife to her depressed husband.....
He goes through dark periods like the moon,
hiding his soul from the world.
I hold his hand and promise,
I will cradle your pain and kiss our wounds.
I will find his light with my hand pressed lightly on is
I will lead him to a gentle sea and let him feel the caress,
of its uncontrolled movement and grace.
And when the darkness comes upon him again,
we will look to the starry sky in blissful silence,
and breathe the night air.
We will remind each
and the joy in the moment we are together.
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The following poem is about my mother. My mother in denial for what I firmly believe is chronic BPD. This poem is in no way meant to offend any BPD sufferers out there that are seeking treatment. My mother has been and will always be in denial after causing a lifelong train wreck for so many people. Thankyou.
THE PRICE OF DENIAL
Today she is the queen
Dressed so you should please
Commands and ownership of her clan
It not matter that you 50yo…and are a man
Tomorrow comes and the witch bursts through
Without warning you never knew
Arrives so fast through doom and gloom
Quick as hell on intercontinental broom
The relief as a day calm and safe
But the third character- comes the waif
Tears for strangers is playing the game
Evil behind doors its such a shame
The final card is played by her
Lost track of who we were
Threatens to pack her bags and leave
We were only kids then can you believe?
The BPD chronic mum is terminal see
As karma comes to her eventually
Queen to none as they’ve flown the coup
We enjoy our roasts while she sips her soup…..
Tony WK
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There’s a man
Who's meant to die
I will forever cry
‘cause I thought
He will never never die
He will never fade away
But it was a personal lie
He is gone
And he’ll never come back
I don’t wanna see
What’s reality
Living in dreams
Where he smiles on me
I don’t wanna be alone
I don’t wanna be sad
If only
Yggy (1992)
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I either write serious stuff or nonsense
MILLICENT
Millicent,
so innocent,
well that's what they say.
But I caught her with her daughter
nicking stuff today.
In haberdashery
her flattery
made the sales girl blush
as she plundered while she wandered,
then went out in a rush.
At the jewellers
she really fooled us,
admiring every tray.
slipped a locket in her pocket,
then left the shop in disarray.
Octavia
was her saviour,
she couldn't take any more.
Said Mother stop it
or I'll hop it
and go to live in Singapore
Now Millicent
is really innocent,
she's turned over a new leaf.
A most effective store detective,
she can always spot a thief.
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My name is Scotty Finger
On BB I want to linger
I may look quite depressed
But right now I am undressed
I know it won't phase ya
That I taught English in Asia
Problem was
resettling
Reverse culture shock
unsettling
Don't think I am a real Aussie
Not sure who I am
Actually
I suffer social anxiety too
It makes me think too much too
I am as screwed up as the next person
Isn't the world crazy?
My claim to sanity is that I know
I am crazy in a crazy world
Oh god this poem lost its way somewhere