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The poetry corner - post your poems in here
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Hi everyone,
This is a thread for sharing your creative works.
Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.
This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.
We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.
Thanks for your understanding.
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I originally posted this on the wrong thread. Im not too good at the rhyming thing but it is what it is.
HEARTSCARS AND BLACKDOGS
Manic and made for pleasure and pain,
Intertwined and inseparable,
feeding into each other like a figure 8, physical and otherwise.
I once knew something beautiful she said, something worth the risk.
Fraying at the seems and still bleeding, she tries to cauterize old wounds,
only to heal she says,
only for them to turn cold, misshapen and become a permanent reminder.
She relegates her heart to be only a keeper of misery.
Quietly and with surprising ease she disowns her own heart hoping it would slay the beast.
knowing it can only ever remain dormant inside her never truly gone as she wishes it to be.
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Hey everyone so usually I don't share poems but I make an exception with this one because I trust the people on here not to judge me for what's in it.... So here is it....
There's been fights with so many words left unspoken
So many promises that were made to be broken
So many tears that ran down the side of your cheek
And so many putdowns that left you so weak
But yet I stood by your side, I was always there
I'm just someone's daughter who never fails to care
At times you said I was more mature than I should of been
Because of all the things that i'd done, things that I'd seen
But I continue to surprise you each and every day
With the things that I do and the things that I say
Always helping people out when they were in need
Always writing words I knew people wanted to read
But guess what? All I am is just a 20 year old girl
And sometimes I feel forgotten by the world
Because when someone's always there for you
I guess you don't see that they also hurt too
Because I've always got a smile and a hug to give
But did you know there's times that I struggle to live?
Self acceptance, anxiety, the things you don't see
That when I'm helping you, my devils are hurting me
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Talons 4 life
beautiful poem, it's tell us perfectly how you feel I read something that said people who reach out to others the most are the ones who are struggling themselves the most
you deserve peace and happiness, I hope you are able to find it.
cmf
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beyondblue's clinically-trained moderators often work offline (invisible to you) on issues relating to suicide or self-harm. At the same time, general supportive comments from the community are encouraged. If you have concerns around suicide or self-harm, please phone our support service on 1300 22 4636
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beyondblue's clinically-trained moderators often work offline (invisible to you) on issues relating to suicide or self-harm. At the same time, general supportive comments from the community are encouraged. If you have concerns around suicide or self-harm, please phone our support service on 1300 22 4636.
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INK SPOT
To focus on an ink spot
So damn irrelevant
Missing the value
of what Passes me by
I straighten myself
As if I’ve won
Move my eyes from that ink spot
I no longer focus on….
Tony WK
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Everyone has mental monsters inside of there mind.
Almost everyone thinks they are alone with this kind.
People handle these monsters in different ways.
Some hide from them with logic or faiths.
Some fight them with anger and hate.
Some dream for a better tomorrow.
Some give in to them and end up in sorrow.
Some of these methods end up all right.
But for those who can't deal with this blight.
Know one thing that you might need.
This could be helpful indeed.
Asking for help is not weak.
And it's always there as long as you seek.
Family, teachers, doctors and friends.
The list almost never ends.
And if you don't want to talk to someone you know at all.
Then give Beyond Blue a call.
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I'm broken
Tears well up
Choking on words that hold meaning
I can't smile any more
All other feeling has ebbed away
Anger stays, hate and sorrow
One way out
Choking on the things that hold me up
I'm broken
Maybe this will fix me
Darkness
Fear
Awake
Crushed by things that once held me
This can't fix me
I'm broken
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Writing poetry or music is sometimes the only way to express what's happening inside, emotionally and mentally. This is an early effort.
DAISY LOVE © 2007
to pull the petals off a daisy flower one by one by one
slowly dissecting beautiful nature for some trivial fun
am I loved . . . or not --- am I loved . . . or not
discarding a flower from a garden like trash
playing a childish game . . . mere chance so brash
even or odd, one by one by one
I am loved . . . I’m not --- I am loved . . . I’m not
and the daisy knows . . . or so it goes
the answer to the question
and in so stating . . . Nature mutilated
lying on the ground to rot
was I love . . . or not --- was I love . . . or not
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Gi'day honeybean
Lovely poem -- and sooooo true.