Needed to share

[Heartness1]

Hey all I needed a place where I could safely share some of.my writing I have just wrote a new song/poem and wanted to share

HURT

Everyone’s problems are not mine to bear
Everyone’s pain and guilt are not mine to take on
I can’t help others if I can’t help myself
Asking for help can be hard
Trust me I know first hand

So much hurt so much pain
So much guilt ITS TO MUCH TO TAKE
I need to let go
I need to be free
This big heart of mine needs to beat free and for me

Not knowing where to go or look
Not knowing what doors to open or closed
So I asked you
Let me help me before I help you

So much hurt so much pain
So much guilt ITS TO MUCH TO TAKE
I need to let go
I need to be free
This big heart of mine needs to beat free and for me

One day the pain will become too much to bear
And you want it all to be over and end
Trust me I get that I’ve been there and done that
It just passes to all the people who love and care

So much hurt so much pain
So much guilt ITS TO MUCH TO TAKE
I need to let go
I need to be free
This big heart of mine needs to beat free and for me

You might feel like it’s all over
And there’s nothing left to live for
Look inside you deep inside you
And you will see you
Trust me thats enough to live for

So much hurt so much pain
So much guilt ITS TO MUCH TO TAKE
I need to let go
I need to be free
This big heart of mine needs to beat free and for me

[quirkywords]

Welcome heartless to the forum and thanks for sharing your poem.

I was touched by your poem.

You are welcome to post here and you may like to check out

the poetry corner-post your poem here

You can type it into search engine or find it in the bb social zone.

Does writing poetry help you with sorting out your feelings. I have written poetry but it is just fir me and is an emotional diary.

I am sure your words will have helped people who have read it.

Thanks again,

Quirky

[Heartness1]

Thank you so much

[coal]

Wow ' Let me help me before I help you' double Wow

your a good poet plz post any others