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Hi everyone,
This is a thread for sharing your creative works.
Please bear in mind our community rules before submitting your work.
This thread is located in the BB Social Zone, so the primary purpose here is entertainment.
We will not publish poems containing dark or disturbing content, including themes of suicide, self-harm, death, dying, abuse or other forms of trauma.
Thanks for your understanding.
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G'Day all,
I have always been passionate about Mens’ Health and just recently wrote a poem about Persistence. I thought I would send it to ‘Beyond Blue', an organisation that always leads by example, ‘talk’s the talk and walk’s the walk’.
Hopefully, this humble Ode might resonate with one person who might be doing it tough right now and thinks there is no end in sight.
ODE TO PERSISTENCE
Can you hear it in the distance?
Past the willows and the trees
Through the rain and misty valleys
On the tide of aqua seas?
Like a camel in the desert,
You go searching for a drink,
But that shimmer’s just a glimmer...
Into dust, your hopes do sink.
Still, you climb that lofty mountain,
Up amongst the rocky crops
Your legs are tired and weary,
And the struggle never stops.
Then you float along the ocean
Life-raft bursting at the seams.
But the drifting lasts forever,
And it never meets your dreams.
How much longer can you take it?
Will you ever find the key?
Your internal voice reminds you,
There’s a place you need to be.
You try and make your own luck,
As the time keeps ticking by,
Because you know your dream is worthy
So, you give it one more try!
With a soul in search of wisdom
You’re committed to the truth,
And soon you start to realise...
That all you need is proof!
Like a dancer chasing answers –
waltzing proudly down the road
Then you ask yourself the question -
What's the moral of this ode?
And a light comes shining brightly
As it’s whispered in your ear -
Keep on pushing forward friend...
Success is very near.
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Lovely poem, Tony.
Hugzies
mmMekitty
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FROM AN OVERCOAT OF GREY
Wrote a letter in an attic on a cloudy day of pain
Sent it to my folder, labelled “regretfully insane”
Couldn’t mail it to my youngest in her typical silent way
“You needed me in London- I’d swim if I could not pay”
And the fairies played their bugles while in slumber land
And the teddy’s cared for all, so they could understand
That the song of love was one sided in my life of joy
I wish I could master being hugged - of being just a toy
And the forces I do not know are there for all to see
If we searched hard enough they laugh – laugh so merrily
But it comes to loving parents when the corner has a bend
That’s why I mask my pain with rhymes I never send
And those fairies still play their bugles and Barbie’s do their hair
I can look closely still, but there’s only one daughter there
In a room of joy and words meant to harm and annoy
I wish I could master the magic- of returning to a toy…
A price to pay for kindness, returned without a task
A symbol of returning care- isn’t much to ask
There was a time I told her I’d swim if I could not pay
All the love I had, from an overcoat of grey….
There are too many mirrors in her life of sanity
And words of care are missing not eyes of vanity
There’s a poem of hope gathering dust and almost in decay
“I’d swim to London to save you…if daddy cannot pay…”
TonyWK
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