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Croix Parler
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I'd like to use this pace for miscellaneous matters that don't fit elsewhere
Thanks
Croix
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ER, it is the reverse version which is the equivalent of Om mani padme hum mantra of all inebriated beings. It is a certain proof that one is not inebriated 'enough' if one can sing the song entirely backwards.
If the kiwis are navel-gazing, they best do so very mindfully, lest they poke their beaks right through the middle & out the other side & will awake to find themselves feeling very deflated. No simple hangover, this.
Hugzies
mmMekitty
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Hi Croix and MK,
Thank you for your literary creation Croix. You are helping inspire me to create worster poems. MK, “engorge a gorge” is a fine ending. Yes, too much naval gazing from a kiwi could lead that long snoot of theirs to poke through to the other side.
There was a penguin named Clyde
Who liked to whiz down a slide
Over the igloo
And into the deep blue
Waking the walrus inside
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Croix, I have a last line for you, (& a little bit of punctuation). Hope you like:
A kiwi has a beaky snoot.
Its private life is a hoot.
With empty bottles all around,
In corners snoring it is found,
With a walrus smelling of vintage fruit.
Hugzies
mmMekitty
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Ray and cat gladden
white blossoms on the cherry
are just seasonal
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Good haiku, Croix. Like this one?
* Smell
Walrus rests replete
Leftover clams at his 'feet'
Cherry blooms smell sweet.
mmMekitty Sept 27 2023
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Actually LRC had a paw in that one.
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* Haikus
Thoughts enmesh sublime
Focused ideas in time
Haikus need not rhyme.
mmMekitty - September 28, 2023
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Thanks Croix. I appreciate your support.
Hugzies
mmMekitty
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Cute penguin waddles
Amongst a sprawl of kiwis
Emitting loud snores
Resplendent walrus
Silhouetted at sunset
Upon the iceberg
Little red cat leaps
Onto the igloo boldly
To enjoy the view
Eagle Ray - September 28, 2023
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Dear ER~
I had people like you at school. They would muck round, not study and generally have a good time - then come top of the maths class. I agonized over each syllable in the three lines of my haiku and you dash of a page's worth -sheesh
Croix (the ex-poet:)